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STREET POETRY
Contributed by
THUGGIN4REAL
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Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 05:24:55 PM in AEST
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WHAT I WRITE IS CONSIDERED STREET POETRY
ITS ABOUT MY LIFE AS A THUG
AND THE HEART OF MY LOYALTY
I NEVER WOULD OF THOUGHT
I'D LIVE LONG ENOUGH TO WRITE
BUT AS YOU HEAR ABOUT MY STRUGGLES
YOU WILL FEEL THE SHINE OF MY LIGHT
I WONT EVER LIE
CAUSE WHAT I WRITE ABOUT
IS HOW I'M GONNA DIE
SOMETIMES ITS HARD TO RELATE TO ME
ALL I ASK IS THAT YOU TRY
YES , THE THINGS YOU HAVE READ
I'VE SEEN AND BEEN THROUGH
ITS ALL REAL
I'VE ELOPED MY PEN TO MY PAPER
SO I COULD SEAL THIS DEAL
I HOPE I CAN TOUCH THE SOULS OF THE LOST
MAYBE IT WILL BE ME THAT THEY FEEL
I'LL GIVE YOU A LITTLE OF GOD
AND TELL YOU HOW BAD I WANT A WIFE
I'LL TELL YOU ABOUT MY FELLOW THUGS
AND HOW THEY LOST THEIR LIVES
I'LL TAKE YOU BACK TO MY HOOD
AND EXPLAIN WHY
I CHANGED MY SURROUNDINGS
AND HOW I WENT FROM BAD TO GOOD
THE ONLY WAY TO KNOW ME
IS THROUGH MY WORDS
I'LL SPEAK TO YOU FROM A DISTANCE
FLYING HIGH AS IF I WAS A BIRD
I AM THE STREETS.......
AND THIS IS MY POETRY.......
Copyright ©
THUGGIN4REAL
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2005-03-09 17:24:55]
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Re: STREET POETRY
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 08:20:36 PM AEST
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| Thankyou my friend for sending me your way. This is really good stuff. I am gonna go read some more. Peace to you. |
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Re: STREET POETRY
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by Concrete_Rose on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 09:36:32 PM AEST
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| This poem expresses poetic beauty, it's nice that you've changed your life, you have a talent, and nice to see a thug express feelings. Alicia Aka Candi |
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Re: STREET POETRY
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 11:02:28 PM AEST
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| This is a very heartfelt write, I seriously enjoyed it,thanks for sharing. |
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Re: STREET POETRY
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by arden on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 08:27:35 AM AEST
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i must say i am impressed.
nice turn around, and for the best i'd say.
the rhyming patteren is a bit off. there are spots where you have it and others that you dont, either stick with it or without it.
the poem itself speaks loud valumes. its truely a great meaningful write.
well done.
Arden |
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Re: STREET POETRY
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by Kay-Kay on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 04:32:38 PM AEST
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this is a really good poem, i like your writing style, you can explain alot in your words. Great poem!
~Kay-Kay |
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Re: STREET POETRY
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by Daniels_Princess on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 04:54:11 PM AEST
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Hey, buddy..Again, another amazing write..you have a way with words and Im really proud of you for turning your life around and you can reach a lot of people with your poetry, just keep writing from the heart
P.S..As for the line "AND TELL YOU HOW BAD I WANT A WIFE" *Raises hand* lol, jk..take care |
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Re: STREET POETRY
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by EmoDCgirl36 on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 08:25:40 PM AEST
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| Your poetry doesn't flow like others... it moves people. I like it. |
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