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awake
Contributed by
electrique_poet
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Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 05:32:04 PM in AEST
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awake
to a new time
of present crime
the news is extraordinary
breakfast is less than stellar
and ignorance of time is a broken heart
speeding to obligations
past the many constellations
a dangerous game we give no thought to at all;
i lounge in a frying pan
and in an hours time my lifes done
and breakfast is served to a lonely boy in germany;
in a new time
of new crime
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Re: awake
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by zenmind on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 05:41:36 PM AEST
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It seems that you are saying a lot here, but I don't know what you're talking about. I can tell that there is a lot of meaning and depth to your words though, and that is a good thing. I like the poem. It just came across kind of vague, but I'm sure to you, there is a precise meaning of what you're talking about. Although maybe there isn't. I can't speak for you. I enjoyed the poem very much.
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