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It Feels So Right
Contributed by
deepxinLOVE
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Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 08:57:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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i love you, you love me,
it's obvious, we're meant to be.
i love the smile on your face,
kiss my lips, i love the taste.
miracles, our love can create,
what brought me to you, i believe was fate.
hold me close, hold me tight,
loving you just feels so right.
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deepxinLOVE
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2005-03-09 20:57:09]
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Re: It Feels So Right
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by jeannoh on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 10:26:32 PM AEST
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simple but sweet
good rhyming
I liked this poem
thank you for sharing
Jeannoh |
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Re: It Feels So Right
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by breny on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 10:50:47 PM AEST
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this is cute! and i love this feeling.
nice rhyming and stucture. good write :-D
~Brenna~ |
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Re: It Feels So Right
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by ButchCorpuz on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 05:40:51 AM AEST
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Good poem!
Simple, yet packed with emotions just waiting to explode.
Keep up the good work!
-Butch |
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