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Lost to the Darkness
Contributed by
mnk_1112
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Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 12:28:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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drown
drown in the silence
lost
lost to the darkness
cry
cry to the heavens
mourn
mourn for the lost soul
flee
flee from the torment
search
search for redemption
hope
hope in tomorrow
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2005-03-10 00:28:56]
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Re: Lost to the Darkness
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 01:02:28 AM AEST
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I haven't seen your work, prior to this piece, yet if you say you haven't written a poem like this, I think you should more often, because this is fantastic!
I like that you conveyed dark themes throughout the piece, in unison to your title "lost to the darkness", and am pleased to see that there is light (disguised as 'hope') at the end of this dark tunnel.
This piece was thought provoking and intriguing.
It was interesting to see how you had expressed yourself, in regards to your title -'lost to' and not 'lost in' -it says alot...
Like perhaps its temperamental inclination to your situation?
This piece reminded me of the cycle post death.
I loved it... short and sweet! |
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Re: Lost to the Darkness
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by mina-1 on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 02:48:29 AM AEST
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| A strong, thought provoking well written piece of poetry. I throughly loved reading your poem short and sweet. A beautifully wriiten poem. Thanks for sharing it. |
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Re: Lost to the Darkness
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 05:03:25 AM AEST
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| this was awesome, i loved reading it truly. i loved the ending, makes me smile. theres always a glimmer of hope in the darkest of darkness. i like it |
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