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End of Search
Contributed by
dreamer_for_eternity
on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 05:54:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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I'm so hungry
It's not for food I long
I'm starving to find
the place where I belong
I looked in one place
And I stayed for awhile
But I felt as insecure
As a young and foolish child
So to the next spot
On I went
There I stopped
Grew even more bent
The third place I found
I wanted to stay
But the happiness ended
Lasted only a few days
I kept to myself
I was my only friend
But I found a fourth place
Where my search would end
My new friend
Had nothing missing
I could depend on him
To always be listening
He helped me elimanate all of the frauds
My new friends name is simply "God"
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Re: End of Search
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 09:11:47 PM AEST
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I am not sure if I liked the beginning. The whole food part was just weird. I got it, but it didn't seemed need. It could be needed to make the rhyme, but it is just weird. Now I really, really liked the rest of the poem. The whole message of the poem was great and it was written very smoothly and nicely. This is an amazing poem. Great write...
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