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desperate
Contributed by
vindicated_loZer
on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 06:29:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I need to Move on
Choking me Choking me
I'm so lost Inside
Life a mere Jail cell
The walls Closing in
Putrid white Smell
Somebody KILL ME
razorblade smiles
little black kiss
red gleaming scars
I'll end me like THIS
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2005-03-10 18:29:59]
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Re: desperate
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 05:04:51 PM AEST
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Thought-provoking, insightful and very expressive. Yet another stunning write, thanks for sharing.
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