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Picture perfect
Contributed by
CannablissJunkie
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Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 07:03:21 PM in AEST
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Desperate in definite cool color,
Can you frame this portrait of your self?
I have seen you from every point of view,
Besides the one Im viewing now.
Your good side never impressed me, so believe when I say..
Ive seen more character in an animal.
At least they respect theyre animal nature,
At least they dont eat each others hearts.
So what do you think of yourself now?
youll never have what couldve been ours.
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CannablissJunkie
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Re: Picture perfect
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 12:33:31 PM AEST
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| Great write. Would have to agree with the line~~I've seen more character in an animal~~I know a few humans I've felt that way about. Peace to you. Laura |
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Re: Picture perfect
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 09:54:40 PM AEST
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OooOooO... wow. Now this one has a bit of emotions in it. Harsh... but in a good way. There are people like that, and I am not saying that it is wrong of you to be harsh because many deserve it. That is a great, great write. Fantastic, and really deep with anger...
Jodi |
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