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Hello Goodbye
Contributed by
CannablissJunkie
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Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 07:20:24 PM in AEST
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The desparate leaves on these trees moving vibrantly with summers breeze startle me.
We were all staring casually, as it all seemed to stop, and then the sun went away.
And chaos never occured to be an option, but it's now the fad of today.
And well all end each other by the time authorities have anything (????) to say.
And this world will be cold and ugly without anything creating acid rain.
Yes this world will look grey without anything causing stress and pain.
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Re: Hello Goodbye
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by nail-to-the-head on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 07:25:45 PM AEST
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wow, great write, goes quiet deep. well done!
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Re: Hello Goodbye
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 12:30:31 PM AEST
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| Stopped in because your name caught my pothead eye. Hee Hee. Interesting write. Peace to you. |
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