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You Planned To Leave Me Here?
Contributed by
RazorBladeWar
on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 07:25:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You told me one night
You O.Ded on some things
You were planning to give up
Planning to leave everything
I cryed on the phone
and you told me your still here
I told you i know but what if you wern't
You were just going to give up?
and leave me in this conceited world
all alone
with no one to huddle up with
or talk on the phone ...
I remember the first day
i saw YOU for YOU
Not just that silly boy
that lived down the street
Who dressed in black and acted like he knew everything
You were sooo sweet that night
Thats when i fell in love
with everything about you
even your perfect teeth
That night when we hung up
I didn't realize it right away
but i was sooo close to loosing you
i can still almost feel you slipping away!
Please promise me you will be big and brave
and next time
don't think strait to the grave!
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RazorBladeWar
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2005-03-10 19:25:10]
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Re: You Planned To Leave Me Here?
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by nail-to-the-head on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 07:33:12 PM AEST
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| again really good write! going to read more of your stuff. |
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