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Ashes
Contributed by
Mallard8
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Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 08:29:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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We shall resurrect the fire in our lives through the ashes of our dreams
The more we show and talk the more we move closer to the flame.
As the fire of our love comes alive you flourish in beauty
I watch as the fire bounces of your beautiful face and I wonder how I came to meet this Angel
The fire is burning greatly as we come closer to each other
Yet we can tell it is not to its full capacity yet, not even close.
Only we know, we must let it burn slowly and long rather than fast to extinguish
Our love will burn through our relationships even when we shall ignore it.
Yet the closer we become the higher and hotter the fire becomes.
Only to explode shall it become its fullest.
I remember our first kiss, a mistake happened
But now look has it gotten better?
That is our relationship, first we make a mistake
But then it flourishes into something so special and beautiful that we can never look back
So let us try again, please
I love you, there is no mistake there, let me kiss you one more time
Copyright ©
Mallard8
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2005-03-10 20:29:02]
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Re: Ashes
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by darkcutterBree on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 12:46:43 PM AEST
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this was excellantly written and the flow is great! keep it up!
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Re: Ashes
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by Atari on
Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 05:27:00 AM AEST
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Wow darlen,
It really intruiged me...it's sad...but yet it's regretfull. I know how it is to feel something for someone whom you believe you love and it all go to hell. But ya' know life goes on and people change. I feel like i'm standing on a soap box preaching but been there done that got the scars on the heart to prove it.
much love,
Ariane |
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