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todays a day
Contributed by
visualizing_life
on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 09:01:59 PM in AEST
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todays a day
todays a strange day
i wanna live
this is new
i felt horrible
in the morning
then you came
and i saw my light
the way you looked at me
i felt loved
that maybe, just maybe
you cared
everytime im w/ you
i feel that i wanna live
every breath i take
i thank god that i do
and the reason is you
i never felt like this be4
im happy
and i blame you
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Re: todays a day
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 06:08:12 PM AEST
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The ending of this poem is really great, extremely great. We need more writers that can end a poem like you. Great write...
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