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do you understand
Contributed by
visualizing_life
on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 09:08:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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do you understand
wat you do to me
everytime you walk in the room
everytime you kiss me
wen you walk in
my strength walks out
you make my knees weak
wen you kiss me
wen you put ur arms around me
wen you look into my eyes
wen you smile at me
i feel loved that you care
this feeling inside
is almost more than i can take
i havent felt like this in a while
in love
i dont know how you do it
im so in love w/ you
i wanna be w/ you
always
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Re: do you understand
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 09:46:54 PM AEST
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| Nice visuals. The poem is touching, though it would be easier to read with proper spelling...not saying you should change, just saying it'd be easier. overall, nice job. |
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