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Blood Green
Contributed by
MLCstar
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Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 09:56:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Born in blood, green with envy
His fire burns, how can that be?
Still he shines with brighter blazing
and stands so tall among his peers
Head held high, he walks so proudly
not proud enough to hide his scars
They point and laugh while he passes
He never says a word to them
Adventure waits around his corner
Hell leave this town of heartless stone
He wont forget those that loved him
And dream about them late at night
Arriving where his feet have led him
He looks around his new found land
Such life and promise lay before him
Death and horror they behind
Now his fate will meet his future
Copyright ©
MLCstar
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2005-03-10 21:56:16]
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Re: Blood Green
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by high_on_duct_tape on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 10:00:30 PM AEST
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Re: Blood Green
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by freckle on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 10:31:51 AM AEST
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This is a good write but I feel like there is more to it....I want to know what his future is...thanks for sharing!
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Re: Blood Green
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 06:38:08 PM AEST
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This is a really good write. I am not sure what else to say about this one. It is just really good...
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