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such as knives and razors
Contributed by
darkcutterBree
on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 10:46:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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i am the dark girl,
the hardly there girl,
an alone girl,
and i only blame you.
you cause me pain and,
break my heart but,
you dont realize,
your every dream come true.
it takes so much too,
understand such as life,
and soon enough now,
there will come the time.
so to get there,
i will wander,
i will question,
your every thought tonite.
ive discovered,
im too dangerous,
and i could hurt,
someone like me.
then ill take these,
knives and razors,
to cut my heart with,
and let it bleed.
youve given up,
any hope for me,
and its time now,
for you to understand.
ill be waiting,
for you to answer,
and soon enough,
i will be living again.
i am lying doormant,
laying on the floor,
its amazing,
shocking tazers.
living sublty below the surface,
all alone here,
heres my story,
such as knives and razors.
Copyright ©
darkcutterBree
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2005-03-10 22:46:05]
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Re: such as knives and razors
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 10:49:52 PM AEST
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| Dark, lovely, and well written. The emotions portraied are portrayed well...this is really well written. nice job! |
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Re: such as knives and razors
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by subgenius on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 10:48:33 PM AEST
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i really like this and know where you're coming from. but don't give up! I especially like
"I'll be waiting for you to answer, and soon enough, I will be living again." |
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Re: such as knives and razors
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by Mallard8 on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 01:11:08 AM AEST
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Dope write, super dark too.... kinda scary.. dope though
Peace
Mallard |
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