|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
I'll Remember You
Contributed by
essentially9
on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 11:12:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
|
I'll Remember You
I'll remember...
The blade rusted with tears
Used to escape all of your fears,
And the blood induced from the blade
With the release of your pain.
You have skin you're afraid to show
And let anyone know
That you bear all of this pain alone
Till you die without the reason known.
I wish that you could see
For the blade you have no need.
I wish for you to get through,
But if that's something you cannot do;
My tears will remember you.
Because if you die...
I'll remember my existence
Couldn't get through the emptiness,
And that my light shown through darkness
Couldn't help because you were so lost in it.
I'll remember you,
And how you couldn't get through.
I'll remember I never wanted to lose you,
But because of your pain I had to.
Copyright ©
essentially9
... [
2005-03-10 23:12:52]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: I'll Remember You
(User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 11:18:52 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Wow....Well said Jen...you always amaze me....Again.
Clark |
|
|
Re: I'll Remember You
(User Rating: 1 )
by Mystic_Beauty_nz on
Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 11:31:01 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| we all have our own pain thresh hold and a lot live feeling the pain of others.. your experience is one truely worth passing on to the world... well done and may we all learn |
|
|
Re: I'll Remember You
(User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 03:38:48 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
WELL WRITEN & IT SPEAKS REAL LOUD!
DAN!! |
|
|
Re: I'll Remember You
(User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 04:46:35 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| What shall I say after reading such a nicely crafted poem..it speaks a lot..:-) venkat |
|
|
Re: I'll Remember You
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 07:05:57 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
this is so incredibly sad.. it just breaks my heart.. hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
|
|
Re: I'll Remember You
(User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 10:59:50 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This reminds me of some of the things I used to write, I like it.
I really think the start is the best in this, it really caught my attention, and kept me reading on.
The end is also fantastic. Great write.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
|
|
Re: I'll Remember You
(User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 12:06:38 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Jennifer this was a very moving poem, brought tears to my eyes. Well written on such a tragic subject. Much peace to you my friend. Laura |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
