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Traces in your mind

Contributed by HerDa on Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 06:23:35 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Traces in your mind
are left by someone behind
you forgot
you are the god
you will forget
youre caught in the net

praise that one for the given privilege -
the king of yours is a thief from a village
your tiny life is not forgotten -
it is rotten
just slightly rotten

heat in your heart
you felt
it pains now hard
you lost your love
what did deserve you?
just serve
and sob

sunshine - in teardrops
rainbow - above the rocks

wa pa ti ta
no one will die
wa pa ti tu
I love you too

wa pa ti ta
I always lie
wa pa ti tu
youll kill me too
youll kill me too
Ill kill you too

awake youre thrilled and tied
asleep youre free and light
you see th same life inside the mirror
guess, what is real?
your life or mirror?

youre free enough to fly while awake
youre god enough to change your life-way
when you jump to the only one conclusion -
life is illusion
your sweet illusion
your false illusion
nightmare illusion

Choose any
choose any
choose any!

Copyright © HerDa ... [ 2005-03-11 06:23:35]
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