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The Undiscovered Country
Contributed by
glu1
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Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 12:57:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Sudden, the cold clear waters
Break on crystal cliffs
Gardens of red and pink
shudder and sway in rhythem
in the sweeping breeze
Flowing rivers of purest black
channel into line, no meander
cascading into the nothing and the nowhere
Mountain ledges, yield crops
of bluest amythest
trapped forever in the glacial still
of time
An undiscovered country
no war no pain no death
where all is calm and real
no demons darken her door
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glu1
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2005-03-11 12:57:46]
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Re: The Undiscovered Country
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 01:13:50 PM AEST
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Very nicely done, yet another original and creative write from you, I look out for some more. Beautiful.
Take Care
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Re: The Undiscovered Country
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by Rhymingron on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 06:40:25 PM AEST
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| A very nice poem, very discriptive, like a beautiful painting. |
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Re: The Undiscovered Country
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by girltranscended on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 09:43:53 AM AEST
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"the glacial still of time"
This is an amazing line! and I also really liked your last stanza but specifically this line:
"no war no pain no death"
Kenya is very lucky to have these poems written for her. :)
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