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Candy Coated Kisses
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 01:29:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I love your candy coated kisses,
They came to me after all my wishes,
The sweet taste of your strawberry lips,
Under your sugary spell I slip.
Your eyes like two little pear drops,
I never want your sweet loving to stop,
Your skin as soft as smooth toffee,
Your heavenly deep smell of coffee.
Your dark hair's like bits of liquorice,
I cant help it I think you are delish,
Your tongue like a red carpet of sherbet,
After just one kiss I can never forget.
You fill my world with chocolate bars,
Steal for me the midget gem stars,
I can never have enough of you,
You are a Turkish delight thats true.
You are such an array of beauty,
The scent of you is rather fruity,
I just adore your candy coated kisses,
They have come to me after all my wishes.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-03-11 13:29:22]
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Re: Candy Coated Kisses
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 01:34:02 PM AEST
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awww so sweet.About time you get out of your depresssion and writes some love poetry.great job.
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Re: Candy Coated Kisses
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 01:35:13 PM AEST
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This is absolutely beautiful. Its so cute and adorable, I had to smile lol. Written to perfection, as always, and simply gorgeous. Thanks for sharing.
Take Care
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Re: Candy Coated Kisses
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 01:55:22 PM AEST
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truely a yummy poem, very sweet and makes me happy to read it! romantic and so loving:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Candy Coated Kisses
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 02:15:32 PM AEST
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This is great, girl.
This is so unique and very original, I have never seen anything quite like this before.
Such a great write.
*huggies* Phil xxx |
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Re: Candy Coated Kisses
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by blowfish_jane on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 02:27:34 PM AEST
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What a lovely write Kirssie, it's about time i see some lovely romantic poems from you i've missed it a lot. So thanks for writing and sharing this.
Always,
Jane |
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Re: Candy Coated Kisses
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 03:49:01 PM AEST
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Now this is the kind of poem I love seeing from you.... Good 'sweet' write...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Candy Coated Kisses
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by fielding88 on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 05:32:59 PM AEST
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| I have to say, you're an extremely versatile poet. I really loved the kind of rhymes you've come up with here, it was just a fun and loving write, and it was so descriptive, i think ill go have some candy now myself... :P amazing stuff here, just great |
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Re: Candy Coated Kisses
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by liquidsunshine on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 08:45:24 PM AEST
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Heh... I know what you mean... love and especially kisses and showing affection for one another can be so sweet.... It's like you've been let loose in a candy store.
Very well done here, I must say. Well done indubidibly (or however it is you spell that... it's just fun to say).
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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