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fridays remembered
Contributed by
Red_October
on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 03:08:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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it's friday again
remember when
fridays were ours?
sixteen fridays in a row
we found a secret place to go
beneath the open sky
hidden between trees
in abandoned buildings
it was just you & me
i remember every time
and every kiss
how did it ever
fade into this?
this hollow space
that we've become
is too foreign to understand
it's difficult to fathom the loss
the same way that you can
just stay on your side of the safest world
you, your wife, & your little girl
picture perfect
creeping
with me under the surface
in & out of reality
fading
into friday again
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2005-03-11 15:08:19]
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Re: fridays remembered
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by fielding88 on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 05:08:17 PM AEST
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| This sounds so tragic, and i love the sense of nostalgia here. I really love the kind of feelings that kind of swelled when I read this. Emotional stuff, really good. |
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