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Contributed by
Dying_Angel
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Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 04:54:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I used to be able to hear the laughter in your voice
To see the joy in your face
To know that with every breath you took another would follow
To know that you were happy
Your voice has become flat and dull
Your face a stone pillar
I fear that you breathe no longer
I fear that you are unhappy
To tell you this must be horrible
To hear that you have lost your self
i would be devastated
But you don't show anything
~
You don't live
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2005-03-11 16:54:30]
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Re: You
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 08:00:56 PM AEST
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a sad, deep and emotional write.
I liked the flow of your poem.
Thanks for sharing it |
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