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Thinking of You
Contributed by
gabby521
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Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 06:02:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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This night knows no end
But leaves me to mend
The pieces of heart that you've left
So eager to blame
Freeing none of my pain
I lie here and think about you
But all I can see
Is my misery
And all I can do
Is hope that you're feeling it too
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2005-03-11 18:02:36]
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Re: Thinking of You
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 12:50:55 PM AEST
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Ok... the only thing that I find confusing is the first line. How does that relate to the rest of the poem? Did you put that in there just to make a rhyme. Anyways, the rest of the poem is really good...
Jodi |
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Re: Thinking of You
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by europeanprincess on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 01:03:29 PM AEST
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| This was short and it seems to the point. It was good but I fel it was missing something. Keep writing. |
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