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Please Don't Fallow Me Pt. 2
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
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Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 07:23:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A nightmare filled full of sorrow.
You left me here.
Why did you go?
I want to leave...
You said not to fallow.
My worst fear.
A suicide note.
To be with you...
I feel so hallow.
Another eye full of tears.
Another cough in my throat.
My only love...
Leaving me with a deathblow.
To plague my dreams for years.
You are now my broken hope.
I'm coming to you...
You said "Please Don't Fallow Me".
You must forgive me I cannot fulfill your final wish.
I'm sorry...I must die,
To be by your side.
...
I'm sorry...this world is too cold,
To be without you.
...
I must do, what you asked me not to,
I must,
Fallow
You
...
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
... [
2005-03-11 19:23:00]
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Re: Please Don't Fallow Me Pt. 2
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 07:32:57 PM AEST
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| lovely poems pt.1 and pt.2 greatly written,tho so sad. |
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Re: Please Don't Fallow Me Pt. 2
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 10:20:05 PM AEST
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hauntingly beautiful... hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:-
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Re: Please Don't Fallow Me Pt. 2
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 10:41:21 PM AEST
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| reminds me of poe. he, too, was greatly unappreciated in his time. 14 bucks for the raven...how pathetic... |
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Re: Please Don't Fallow Me Pt. 2
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 02:04:37 PM AEST
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I love this part:
My worst fear
A suicide note
You don't know how much that gets to me. That is one of my biggest fears as well. I don't want to end up going under because of my fear. I didn't know there was anyone else that had a fear such as that. Great write...
Jodi |
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