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Alone is how it works.
Contributed by
_myonlyone_
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Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 10:59:06 PM in AEST
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The heros have left the premises
and Im left here in the dust
not one has stopped to say he cared
but only that he lusts.
and one by one the heros fall
for none are true at all;
the death of one caused finality,
and none will heed the call
of the damsel in distress; not I.
for I have left her there
to discover all for herself
the heros are not here.
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2005-03-11 22:59:06]
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Re: Alone is how it works.
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 08:23:00 AM AEST
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I surprises me that this has no comments,
as this is really good.
I especially love that second stanza, I think it works very well.
Great write,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Alone is how it works.
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 10:10:29 AM AEST
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Ohh this was really good i agree with Phil i can't believe no one has commented on this write.
Do keep writing i will check more of your poems soon.
Jane ^_^ |
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