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BLOOD COVERED WALLS
Contributed by
Anti_social
on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:57:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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As these tears stream down my face
I find my friend... the knife, it's sweet
blade kisses my skinlas I slowly slide it down
my arm, blood running like tears.
I cry, not knowing. You try to stop me but you
cant, no one can. I've lost myslef in this room
with BLOOD COVERED WALLS.
I know you forgot me... but how can I
forget you... and the pain you inflicted on my heart.
As I cry, I think of suicide. I have nothing, nothing to
live for.
Everytime I see you I make friends with another
little cut.
I feel nothing, nothing at all except the pain that
hits me, inside and out.
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Anti_social
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2005-03-12 11:57:31]
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Re: BLOOD COVERED WALLS
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 01:18:37 PM AEST
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this is a great poem... i feel the same way about my ex boyfriend... i can't forget him... but he's already forgotten me... again great poem...
hope to c more from you soon
Jishes |
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Re: BLOOD COVERED WALLS
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 01:39:17 PM AEST
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| This poem was very descriptive, and you can reall feel the author's pain. Extraordinary! |
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Re: BLOOD COVERED WALLS
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by ForeverAlone on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 02:47:53 PM AEST
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Very descriptive...well done...and i hope you get better
Clark |
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Re: BLOOD COVERED WALLS
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by breny on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:29:52 PM AEST
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wow this is so powerful J.J.! you express you're feelings very well. Great write and i hope you start feeling better :-D
~Brenna~ |
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