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Holding You Back
Contributed by
Petznick
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Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 12:41:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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So many things
hold us back
or stand in the way
of what we truly want.
Metaphorically
it could be
a castles wide moat
barring entrance
a cold chain-link fence
preventing contact
a coarse brick wall
limiting vision
or a rope around your neck
halting movement.
And for too many people
thats where it ends
Well I dare you
to swim that moat
to run down past that fence
to scale that wall
or to snap that rope
for your own sake.
Youll thank me when you do.
Copyright ©
Petznick
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2005-03-12 12:41:23]
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Re: Holding You Back
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 01:36:19 PM AEST
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| I loved your poem, it was very inspirational, and the words and metaphors you used, went along really well with your poem, I just wanted to say great job! -Steph |
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Re: Holding You Back
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 10:39:25 PM AEST
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Great write..good use of metaphors..
Jenni
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Re: Holding You Back
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by edwynne on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 07:47:43 AM AEST
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| i like this one, thought provoking and honest. post more |
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