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Patience Is Gone
Contributed by
TheForgottenMelody
on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 03:59:08 PM in AEST
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These words arent chocolates in line
Waiting to be sent off
To the next unlucky ones
I thought that you wouldnt mind
If I moved to your head
Because your heart left me shunned
But you seem to think the same
Playing these useless games
Just talk to me and get to the point
I cant take your venom anymore
It seems too little too late
For me to even try
To sell my truth to you
I no longer need to wait
On your answer to come
Because Ive heard your point of a view
Can I at least be a friend?
This doesnt need to end
Just talk to me and say something
I cant take your drive-bys anymore
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TheForgottenMelody
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2005-03-12 15:59:08]
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Re: Patience Is Gone
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by Mangs on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 04:01:37 PM AEST
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| deep.....i like this |
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Re: Patience Is Gone
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by whispered_cries on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 05:03:58 PM AEST
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i like this a lot.. good write
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Re: Patience Is Gone
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by freckle on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 09:20:32 PM AEST
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Good imagery...I really liked this part...
It seems too little too late
For me to even try
To sell my truth to you
I thought that was really good.
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