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Trapped
Contributed by
Grode
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Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 08:36:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Here I lie drowning in a pool of thought,
Yet I have no answers,
Why am I here,
Where am I going,
Will I find the right path,
Or will I falter,
These thoughts plague my mind like an incurable disease,
The future is right in front of me but I am temporarily blinded,
The world is moving yet I stand still,
In a hallway of doors with the inability to choose,
I find myself trapped by my own indecision
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Grode
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2005-03-12 20:36:43]
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Re: Trapped
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by mina-1 on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 10:39:12 PM AEST
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a sad, but strong powerful write. You can feel your self struggle when reading your poem.
A great poem. Hope all goes well for you |
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Re: Trapped
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by emystar on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 05:55:33 AM AEST
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Any one that can write like you doesn't have to worry bout their future. Jus keep writing as u r on the right track.
huggs,
emy |
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