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you and that voice.
Contributed by
_myonlyone_
on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:09:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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time has stood still
and all I hear is you
as you tell her that
you love her.
and one voice; three words;
they rip me inside out,
and my heart is bleeding on my sleeve
for all the world and you to see.
I'd looked into your eyes
one too many times
and my heart had been stolen
by a thief named you.
she smiles at you
and you glance at her face
my world crashes down
I've been left in this place
without you.
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_myonlyone_
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2005-03-12 23:09:12]
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Re: you and that voice.
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:15:45 PM AEST
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| I like this. You convey the emotion wonderfully. the poem is well written. Very nice job. |
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Re: you and that voice.
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by ButchCorpuz on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 06:23:42 AM AEST
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Very nice poem! Yes, each time a heart is broken, it feels as if the whole world breaks with it. Still, life goes on. Don't find love, let love find you...
keep up the good work!
-Butch |
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