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Whispering Cries
Contributed by
b_rand
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Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 01:34:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Hello? Can you hear me?
I'm sceaming in this silence.
I need you to answer.
And I need you to be honest.
Don't you realize that not knowing is worse than bad news?
This hope that I dangle by... It seems so worthless.
I feel as though I already know the answer,
But your relentless pity keeps me hanging without reason.
Answer me.
I'm torn inside, yet the lies you provide keep me hushed.
The lies you so badly tell, that you think help.
I'm letting you know now, they don't help.
Please, remove this persistent raincoat of lies from both our backs.
Just get it over with.
This is torture.
Copyright ©
b_rand
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2005-03-13 01:34:20]
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Re: Whispering Cries
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by mina-1 on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 02:17:33 AM AEST
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an emotional and sad heart breaking write.
You've expressed yourself so deep and well.
A great write that grips at the heart.
Hope all goes well for you |
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Re: Whispering Cries
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 07:13:40 AM AEST
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what a sad emotional write, so full of pain that it makes the readers feel what you're feeling, which makes this poem such a wonderfull read.
Thank you for posting.
Jane ^_^ |
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Re: Whispering Cries
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:08:30 PM AEST
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| This is a good write . I could feel the emotion and the rthmic flow while reading each line was steady. :-) enjoyable write. But Sad too coz I can relate to feeling this way . |
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Re: Whispering Cries
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by savedbydeath on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 10:08:00 PM AEST
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awesome write,its more then hard to get the truth out of someone,and when we finally do,we wish that the lies were the truth,keep up the great job,ur awesome!!!
*R* |
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Re: Whispering Cries
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by candysears on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 05:19:20 PM AEST
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Great write......
God Bless! |
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