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Mother
Contributed by
broken_wingz
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Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 04:07:37 AM in AEST
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You gave me life
and the chance to live.
For me to be happy
there's nothing you wouldn't give.
Don't blame yourself for my mistakes,
the decisions were all mine.
You did your job the best you could
and I've turned out just fine.
I know I complain about the things I don't have
and the people who did me wrong.
But the foundations you have built for me
are what make me stay so strong.
You are every bit of what I wish to be
and the women I am today.
You should be happy and proud
because it's you that made me this way.
When I get down and struggle with life
all I do is think of you.
All the things that stood in your way
and the ways you made it through.
I just hope when I have kids
that they're as wonderful as you.
So that when I stand in your shoes
I can say I did my job too.
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Re: Mother
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by emystar on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 04:29:49 AM AEST
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Such a beautifull masterpeice to your mom. I'm sure she's so proud of u and will always cherish this write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
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Re: Mother
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 06:59:36 AM AEST
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Aww this was really beautifuly writen, showing such love for your Mom.
Im sure she's proud of you for writing such a wonderful poem
This should be in a Hallmark Card or something cuz it's so pretty.
Hugs,
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Re: Mother
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by Rhymingron on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 08:40:01 AM AEST
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| What a beautiful poem. It could not have been written so beautifully had it not been from the heart. You wrap it up so well and put a beautiful bow on it with your last stanza. |
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Re: Mother
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:00:55 PM AEST
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Excellent dedication . I hope you cc your Mother in your prayers.
Nice write.
Whisper |
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Re: Mother
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by Kie on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 11:05:11 AM AEST
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In the author's comment section when I read that you thought your mother amazing that alone made me want to read more.
Very high praise for a poem that says so very much.
5 stars and then some.
Kie |
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Re: Mother
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by allymp on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 11:29:22 AM AEST
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wonderful poem, i loved it!
its very sweet im sure your moms proud |
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