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Last Candle
Contributed by
ShadowDaughter
on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 12:59:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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yeah, so
last we talked
you were
closer to dragons
{I wonder if
you learned to scream [right]}
than ever before
you swore you'd tell me
when
you found your wings
{I wonder how
>>the sky broke}
I screamed for you,
you know?
(thanks for replying
with
the [proper] words)
it would have been --- - - - brighter
(but you knew that)
had you let me
dream it rugged
and more [foreign] than
your perfect replica.
{I guess you'll never know
your name ...}
Copyright ©
ShadowDaughter
... [
2005-03-13 12:59:30]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: Last Candle
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:49:31 PM AEST
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An intruiging write. Thought-provoking and original. Thanks for sharing. :o)
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: Last Candle
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 02:28:52 AM AEST
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Since I don’t know whom this is for, I’ll just comment on it on a regular thesis.
Although I don’t get it much I thought you’ve displayed such a nice way of expressing your anger/frustration to this person.
I really do like the way you write Nora it’s fascinatingly original and fresh and it’s beyond my comprehension on how you do it, but I praise you on a great write.
Jane^_^
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Re: Last Candle
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 05:46:16 PM AEST
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cryptic, but not without strong emotion.
You do so well at saying much with little, both in meaning and feelings....great job Nora! |
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Re: Last Candle
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by afraid_of_fear on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 05:29:16 PM AEST
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wow nora, how intriguing.. i love poetry like this.. makes your mind wander and wonder.. wonderful..
charlotte xxx |
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Re: Last Candle
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by secretwind on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 01:21:25 AM AEST
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| Interesting write |
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Re: Last Candle
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by ravensofthedark on
Sunday, 26th November 2006 @ 04:01:01 PM AEST
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i thought it was awesome but i didn't really understand all the paranthasis(?) but nice job
dont need a message
~The Raven |
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