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''How I feel about you''
Contributed by
sweet_lil_b2003
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Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:09:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Sometimes at night when I look into the sky I start to think and then I ask myself, why? Why do I love you? I think and I smile because I now the list could go one for miles. The wisper of your voice the wormth of you touch. So many things that make me love you so much. The way that you support me and help me with my emotions. The way you care and show such devotion. The way that your kiss fills me wiht desire. And how you hold me with the warmth of blazing fire. The ways that your eyes shine when you look at me. Lost with you forever is where I want to be. The way that I feel when your by my side a sence of complition and over flowing pride. The dream that I dream that all involve you. How you finish the puzzle taht lies inside my heart. Deep in my soul your the most important part. I could go on for days telling you how I feel. But, all you really must no is my love for you is real.
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Re: ''How I feel about you''
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:37:01 PM AEST
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| Sweet and romantic write. |
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Re: ''How I feel about you''
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:40:08 PM AEST
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This is a really beautiful write. I think perhaps that if you set it out differently, mayhap in stanza's, then it would be easier to read. It is a very moving poem though, wrll written, flows smoothly and is simply gorgeous. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: ''How I feel about you''
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by Broken_Wingz on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 04:08:04 PM AEST
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Your love shines through with a light brighter than the sun. The words in this piece show exactly how beautiful love can really be. Thank you for sharing this with us. It's a work of art.
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Re: ''How I feel about you''
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by whispered_cries on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 04:13:55 PM AEST
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Thats really good..i enjoyed it very much.take care.
Laura |
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Re: ''How I feel about you''
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by forgottenone_iam on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 06:13:59 PM AEST
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that is really cute i feel the same way about a guy its the best feeling in the world dont you think?
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Re: ''How I feel about you''
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by JasTrask_22 on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 08:22:43 PM AEST
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WOW.. i enjoyed this very much so! haha i feel the same way about a guy.. i sorta expressed it in one of my poems, but yours is soo much more interesting!! i absolutely loved it. swear to god~ i dont think i could've put it into better words than you could. THANKS ALOT
ttyl
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Re: ''How I feel about you''
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by EverlastingDawn on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 11:33:08 AM AEST
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Its a cute poem
It flows nicely and the rhyming's good
Nice Write
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