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Bleach My Fire
Contributed by
InexactExactness
on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 07:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Take your gun and fire it loud Point it at me once again Your words hurt when I bite the bullet They are embedded in my skin Killing me gracefully It's always been your dream You wish you could tempt me You wish it all the same Like a cat catching a mouse You wish you were that fast But I'm always a little faster I'm the fire and the blast Scream at me and sulk in stupidity You can't even conceive Of that sweet serendipity When I'm still thriving without you Wallow in your disappointing success Of all the kisses that have regressed Cause the gasoline to bleach my fire And show me who you are
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Re: Bleach My Fire
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 10:31:32 AM AEST (User
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Oh oh i love this one...the title it sooo captured me "Bleach My Fire" ah tha's beautiful...this is so full of strength and power and beauty...this one put a smile on my face...i love the last lines Cause the gasoline to bleach my fire and show me who you are...that's a strong statement right there....this is an excellent write...thank you for sharing it my friend...
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