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Thrill Kill
Contributed by
secretwind
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Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 06:21:50 PM in AEST
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I wake up to sleep
I walk to fall
I'm always bleeding
but don't care at all,
I am so vacant
and emotionally numb
dancing with death
is how I have fun,
nobody knows me
so one really should care
that I sit in my room
staring at a chair.
To many questions
with answers unknown
when I need help
I don't know where to go,
Trapped in a cycle
where confusion reigns
down is up out is in
I burn with pain,
I got some pills
so I can fly
jump off a chair
hang from the ceiling and die.
Copyright ©
secretwind
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2005-03-13 18:21:50]
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Re: Thrill Kill
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by fielding88 on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 06:35:13 PM AEST
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| strong conclusion in this poem. at first i was wondering where it was going, and to me, that was kind of a surprise ending. nice write. |
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Re: Thrill Kill
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by sweet_lil_b2003 on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 09:27:49 PM AEST
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| damn babe...loved the ending yes your writting is good~~Crystal~~ |
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Re: Thrill Kill
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by freckle on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 11:09:58 PM AEST
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Wow, strong write. I related to a lot of it....the poem flowed well and kept my interest...shocking me at the end.
Good write!
Carol |
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Re: Thrill Kill
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 11:34:12 PM AEST
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| brilliant once again. its easy to see you possess the talent of writing. amazing piece. brilliant ending. an ending can make a masterpiece, or it can destroy one. you, have made one. |
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Re: Thrill Kill
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by givingin on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 01:12:30 PM AEST
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Sad write my love.
But do not worry, for when you need help, there will always be someone around.
A friend, family, just remember ppl do care, I care.
Take care.
MUAH!
*~givingin~* |
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