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Lifeless Eyes
Contributed by
addicted2selfharm
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Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 07:16:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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As I lie here in this moment.
Succumbing to your kiss.
The smoke rises from my cigarette.
I melt into pure bliss.
I lay my head upon your chest.
With my heart inside your hand.
I wish this moment would last forever.
I feel dirty, used, and torn.
When your bodys next to mine.
But I dont care; I want.
Youre the closet to love Ill find.
The love we shared is forbidden.
But sacred to my soul.
I want to run back to my life.
But youve already taken control.
Im torn inside my heart and head.
And what I think is right.
This is my internal battle.
My constant and bloody fight.
I wonder if you feel the same.
Tell me, do you feel like I do?
Your lifeless eyes meet mine.
I cant tell if you love me too
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Re: Lifeless Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 07:20:47 PM AEST
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This is darkley pretty. It shows the mixed sadness and happiness(lest to me.) i love your last 2 stanzas, it just sums it up. beautifully written!
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Re: Lifeless Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 08:08:15 PM AEST
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This is truly a beautiful write, and yet its sad at the same time. Written to perfection, flows smoothly and is absolutely gorgeous. I hope things work out for you.
Take Care
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Re: Lifeless Eyes
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by imalive_enoughsaid on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 08:21:50 PM AEST
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| THE LINE "the love we share is forbidden" says this relashionship isent normal.i dont know the sitiuation , but it reminds me of one im in right now because im into an older guy..well anyway this is excellent i like it alot, wonderful flow |
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