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Your Obliviose To Your Greatness
Contributed by
tin
on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 10:34:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I've witnessed perfection,
It rests in your eyes
When i can't find the answer,
your advice is so wise.
When all i seek is truth,
you utter no lies.
When i'm sad but don't show it,
you see through the disguise.
Everyone has shortcomings,
Faults we try not to let rise.
But your only flaw,
is that your full of greatness but don't realise.
Everything about you is perfect,
just like your beautiful hazel eyes.
Copyright ©
tin
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2005-03-13 22:34:29]
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Re: Your Obliviose To Your Greatness
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by TheRaven on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 11:07:34 PM AEST
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very beautiful...reminiscent of my own girlfriend...great write......
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Re: Your Obliviose To Your Greatness
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by sweetncaring on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 12:05:13 PM AEST
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| I like this poem a lot. It is very well written. It reminds me about me and my boyfriend. |
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