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Perfect Family
Contributed by
sweetncaring
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Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 11:47:55 PM in AEST
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MiscPoems
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Sitting behind a desk watching the busy city wondering where his wife is now what she is doing he worked so hard bust lost so much he wonders what is the point of living his life is in shambles and his wife left with his children so what is the point of living then he looks at his desk and sees their smiling faces now he knows what is the point of living he will get them back he knows that to be true he will fight as hard as he can and one day he will have his perfect family he picks up the phone and calls his lawyer find them he yells I can't wait any longer I need them here with me so I can have my perfect family
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Re: Perfect Family
(User Rating: 1 ) by xtremcalibur on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 04:14:45 AM AEST (User
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Pretty much sums it up. Good write. |
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Re: Perfect Family
(User Rating: 1 ) by DorianChambers on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 11:03:21 PM AEST (User
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wow, this is lovely different ,stylish, and very
wall street, which is what i pictured looking
out over a manhatton skyline, but it's cold
i felt and saw the barron cold the man must
have felt, u r good very effective, realy got 2
me, like your style . . .
Dorian Chambers
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