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To the Sky
Contributed by
NobodySpecial
on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 12:36:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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A look to the Sky
Will tell you why
Thousands of Souls
Burn alive
Never seen
In a heart
what it could be
not until
it was far too late
did anybody run
after you
only I knew
of what would come
And I would never tell
Stricken with silence
In a world of hate
fighting for only you
is hard work to do
when so many
just like you
desperatly need
an escape
A look below
will show your heart
what a mind
works for
But right up ahead
the light is gone
and the tunnel is far too long
And nobody's hand is there
to help me find my way
out of the dark
And onto the sky
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NobodySpecial
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2005-03-14 00:36:04]
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Re: To the Sky
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 03:11:25 PM AEST
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hmmm... a very interesting peice of work. very thought provoking, and tinged with sorrow, i can clearly see your predicament... here are my thoughts, as they relate..
this world is full of hopelessness... we often wonder how could a righteous God allow so much bull***** to go on. but here is the truth.. its only for a time. he allows problems, but only to show that he is great enough to save, and contrary to what your name suggests, you are very special! so special, in fact, that he sent Jesus Christ to save you. there is a hand reaching down to you to pull you out of that hopeless tunnel.. and his love expressed through Jesus shows it. he CAN change your life. i know, hes changed mine. he is truth, but in a world full of lies trying to blind us from him, we so easily can loose our vision. if you keep your eyes on him, you will see your redemption coming, and you will see that victory over death and the world has been offered to you!
i hope you find hope... grace be with you.
joshua |
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