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untitled
Contributed by
socialmisfit
on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 02:37:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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confused is my heart
disheveled are my thoughts
Can't hold it in
The tears break free
"sobbing uncontrollably"
My mind breaks down
And my knees give out
A pool forming under me
"I fall to the ground"
Tear stained cheeks
Red rimmed eyes
A soul of madness
"its life, that of sadness"
im hollow within
i don't know what to do
seeking for answers
"i don't know were to begin"
just another face in the crowd
a soundless soul in pain,
listening to the wind blow its sad tune
a knife in the air
played so innocently it hurts
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2005-03-14 02:37:03]
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Re: untitled
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 02:46:42 AM AEST
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| You don't know why you wrote this, but I'm glad you did. And I'm glad I read it. Great write! |
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Re: untitled
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by Broken_Wingz on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 03:15:15 AM AEST
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Amazing. Beautifully written.
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