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Make Me See
Contributed by
BloodsINK
on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 04:44:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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ive been stolen from
every moment being challanged wrong
nothing today is feelin right
and im holding down this knife,
i dun wanna fight
closed fist, angar rages
im closing eye, and watchin cages
in chains i am, bound by metal,
held my pain , let me settle ,
torture screams, im lossing Identity
losing sanity, love wus nothing but the key
help me , please
this is all i ask
take away the chains , help me pass
eyes crying,Losing hope,
And losing reality ,dreams stream down my face
Losing where i am, to this every place
Over Reaching , For The Sky,
Over Reaching , When Dreams Are To High
Over Crying , When Nothing Here
Over Crying , About My Fear
Over Losing , What I Thought I Had
Over Feeling , This Feeling Of Being Sad
So Help Me , Make Me See
Just The Better Part , You See In Me?
Copyright ©
BloodsINK
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2005-03-14 04:44:08]
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Re: Make Me See
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by BrandySwanson on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 07:08:22 AM AEST
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oh this was so sad but beautifully written I could feel the emotions strongly in this poem great job
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