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You'll not Believe!
Contributed by
Unaekseveer1
on
Sunday, 21st July 2002 @ 11:28:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I saw it descend
With flames from its tail
You shouldve seen them
Their skin was so pale
I found a crash site
Six years and four ago
To keep it a secret
No humans must know
This I had sworn
Or hell would arrive
The Earth as we know it
Just would not survive
Its safe to speak now
Or so they have told
At last break my silence
Let the story unfold
They listen to us
Our words and our thoughts
Our television pictures
Our ones and naughts
They now where were heading
Theyve been there to see
I wish I could pen
Just what they've shown me
Youll not believe
The beauty I saw
Overwhelming pleasure
Never dreamed of before
Every one of us there
Understand this is why
All life is so precious
Even after we die
Just knowing our fate
And how itll unfold
With the polar caps melting
And the tropics become cold
If you wish to know more
Then myself you must ask
Understanding it written
Is an impossible task
In riddles it reads
Its not, but its sad
Just ask my senses
Theyve been thinking Im mad!
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Unaekseveer1
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Re: You'll not Believe!
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by Rose on
Wednesday, 24th July 2002 @ 06:49:57 PM AEST
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| Seems I understand this one quite well. Good write :) It may have been just a dream, but thats all the many folks who have had these same similarities. Makes you wonder... Amber Rose :) |
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Re: You'll not Believe!
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Saturday, 3rd August 2002 @ 11:40:03 PM AEST
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Hi Amber, It makes me wonder if they are dreams or messages?
Thankyou for writing
With love
Dean |
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Re: You'll not Believe!
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by emystar on
Saturday, 10th August 2002 @ 08:23:21 PM AEST
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Yes I believe!!!!!!!!!!
Somwhere in the bible it says that Our angels speak 2 us our beds while we're sleeping!!!!!!
It's amazing 2 me of lifes many wonders, dead or alive......
As eternal beings we never die only our bodies jus quit!!!!!!!!
Very good, strong entrancing write!!!!!
MORE, PLEASE??????? |
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Re: You'll not Believe!
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Saturday, 10th August 2002 @ 09:03:27 PM AEST
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Thankyou Emystar, I'm trying! But my dreams all seem to revolve around fields of hands grabbing at my feet! It's like they don't want me to take off any more or something? I've learned what I know and only now am I allowed to pass it on, but it's so nonsensical! That and I also try too hard to make things rhyme, which is wrong you can't make poetry happen!
Maybe if I try to stop trying?
With love
Dean |
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Re: You'll not Believe!
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by ShadowsCloud on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 07:28:17 AM AEST
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Dean, This is a wonderful poem. I really enjoyed reading it. And it does make you wonder.
ShadowsCloud |
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Re: You'll not Believe!
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 07:32:43 AM AEST
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Well wonder no more Candice,
It's all true!!
And if you believe that, you'll believe anything!Hehehehe
It's nice when I dream like this though.
Thankyou very much, I'm pleased you like
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: You'll not Believe!
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by ShadowsCloud on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 07:45:42 AM AEST
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Dean, I believe most anything, but that is one of my problems, that I am too trusting for my own good.
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