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Silver
Contributed by
EternitysLyre
on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 07:07:57 AM in AEST
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you are
, (for all that I know)
my favorite hello
and best 'heya's
I could offer
anywhere.
like whispers
--like dew
. . . .like unshakable shivers
[of warm, teddybear laughter]
if nothing, like nothing
happened
the scent of your hair would
make it all the way here
and I'd harbor a dream
--come true
because Silence
can be magic
{can be human}
can be deadly
[sometimes] I just
clutch inside of me
[just- --sometimes]
and wish...
--I can't say.
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EternitysLyre
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2005-03-14 07:07:57]
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Re: Silver
(User Rating: 1 )
by Tanmaya on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 01:32:17 AM AEST
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I loved reading this.
It has spaces that have nagic, and places that only some can tread.
I like what you have said about silence. My favourite part of the poem-
'if nothing, like nothing
happened
the scent of your hair would
make it all the way here
and I'd harbor a dream
--come true'
Enchanting.
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Re: Silver
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 06:41:43 PM AEST
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A well-expressed free verse piece. I especially like the last bit,
because Silence
can be magic
{can be human}
can be deadly
[sometimes] I just
clutch inside of me
[just- --sometimes]
and wish...
--I can't say.
Aye, that is silence sometimes, indeed.
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