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Under the Bodhi Tree
Contributed by
ShaBa
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Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 09:20:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Light hits my eyes
I can see through the blind
Feel the energy
I wont be left behind
My tongue tastes the air
I hear my mind
The colours arent clear
My wrist are tied
I lust for isolation
But my skin has died
I can smell you through my fingers
I know, Im divine.
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ShaBa
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2005-03-14 09:20:50]
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Re: Under the Bodhi Tree
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by electrique_poet on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 04:21:12 PM AEST
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very vague and open for interpretation, it seems youve said quite a bit here, i enjoyed your words here
... in words electrique |
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Re: Under the Bodhi Tree
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 04:55:06 PM AEST
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| thats beautiful ...i love it !!^_^ |
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Re: Under the Bodhi Tree
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 03:06:00 AM AEST
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I like this.
"I hear my mind"...as though it were tangible...despite its physical cage(the brain)...
This appeals to me.
"But my skin has died"- a rather abstract statement.
"I know, I'm divine."
An intriguing array of enlightenment...produced and realised under the bodhi tree, of course!
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Re: Under the Bodhi Tree
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by ShaBa on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 07:58:57 AM AEST
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Thanks!
Romanticist you hit the nail right on the head, I love hearing the interpertation of someone other than myself. |
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