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Just Stays and Remembers...
Contributed by
Red_October
on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 10:52:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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ill advised
pushed & pulled in twenty directions
i see half-hearted reflections
and it's right outside my door
i lay drunk, dizzy on the floor
it's all so pathetic
and i'm dying for more
looking up at a stark ceiling
with no memories beneath it
tears fall into my ears
and i've no reason to see it
no motivation to stop
no where to be, just dead-locked
frustrated
and inclined to die
but too scared
just stays and remembers to cry
falls asleep to dream
until the next day
where with time i expect
these visions to fade
or at least hide & abide by traditional rules
withhold & withdraw
to a corner in the room
take up minimal space
until i find i need these emotions
on some other day
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Red_October
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2005-03-14 10:52:29]
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Re: Just Stays and Remembers...
(User Rating: 1 )
by EverlastingDawn on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 11:47:25 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem.
Full of emotions.
Nice Write.
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