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* forever I hope *
Contributed by
spooky
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Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 09:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Child crushes,,adult loves,,
once who held,, now embrasses,,
young eye's,, tiny hearts,,
If one could love,, they would,,
Time has aged us,,were both grown,,
but one heart never changed,,
for he still cares,,she never knew,,
where were you,,or had gone to,,
Time has caught us,,hopefully to ,
bring us together,,for the last time,,
hopeing for one heart,,to be two,,
for two will become one love,,
* Forever I hope *
craig s. meeks
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spooky
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2002-12-17 09:40:00]
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Re: * forever I hope *
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 09:56:41 AM AEST
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| Craig,your poetry is always inspiring to me,very good write! Christina |
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Re: * forever I hope *
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 10:52:17 AM AEST
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Now this is very inspirational and made me smile, there's alot of hope written in this poem, and truth and reality and it seems as though alot of heart was put into writing this one i enjoyed this one alot Craig thanks for sharing it....your poetry is a beautiful work of art....
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Re: * forever I hope *
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 05:52:06 PM AEST
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| very good poem i hope you find her cowboy |
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Re: * forever I hope *
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 11:10:10 PM AEST
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Lovely write.. thanks for your very kind comment on my poem..
Jenni |
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