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the Japanese Footbridge by Monet
Contributed by
darkeyedman
on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 10:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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The water lilys draw you in,
Into reflections
a moment from night.
colors and shape
Filtered like memories
Into the essence.
The flowers on the right
Creep upon the bridge,
A blemish of perspective.
Time steals, so beauty is forced to rush.
Patience is impossible
When your mind is maddened
By the undone,
And His unfaithful brush
Lusted new canvas
Bare but for his dreams.
And so he left a beauty mark.
Something to show
It was man and not
Natures doing.
It is a smile for the next painting
And a plea that he
Might paint it.
Copyright ©
darkeyedman
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2002-12-17 10:20:00]
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Re: the Japanese Footbridge by Monet
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 10:58:12 AM AEST
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Beautiful write jim this gives a beautiful vision, do you paint????....thanks for sharing this one...
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Re: the Japanese Footbridge by Monet
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 08:10:37 AM AEST
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Wonderful expression.
I have noticed the very same things as you point out here . . . but I could never have expressed them as eloquently, nor as creatively as you.
Thoroughly well done.
5 stars - again. |
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