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Designated Drivers
Contributed by
LevyMetal
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Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 08:09:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Negative exhalation....and then some.
Pass it around the room then back unto the sun.
The occupance in the corner need not apply.
But its mouth complains until my ears start to cry.
Refrigerated intoxication...in colorful flavors.
Everyone try one and up the electric shavers.
That sour face in your front door should just wither.
Satisify at least, the comfort that she came for.
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Re: Designated Drivers
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by bonita2689 on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 09:01:14 PM AEST
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| Im drawn to this poem, its very colorful and I like the style. What you've written here is just enough to get the idea and exlpode the readers mind with an enchanting song of rhythm and wonder. Extremely well done. |
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