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To Finding Myself Again
Contributed by
bonita2689
on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 08:18:32 PM in AEST
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watch my feet
sing me a lullaby
into a deep sleep
imagine a day in time
broken from rhyme
sacred nothings knock
beneath the windowsill
chattering away into oblivion
straying from a reckless will
falling back into place
my thoughts follow the rain
dripping down with satisfaction
smearing the written pain
watch it slip
from my fingertips
pushing away my sorrows
the rain cloud lifts
leaving me tomorrow
to find everything I miss
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Re: To Finding Myself Again
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by Katie2008 on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 08:27:57 PM AEST
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I like this poem a lot, especially the part, "smearing the written pain" I love it.
Katie
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Re: To Finding Myself Again
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by waos on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 12:08:42 AM AEST
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Yeah, this was good. It had a lot of interesting lines in it.
Nice job putting original thoughts in there. Keep it up.
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