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Pouring
Contributed by
AngelofDeath
on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 09:43:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The rain was pouring
My eyes, tightly shut
Your kiss was entrancing
Your touch was enough
I never knew love
Until I met you
You raised me above
To start my life new
My tears were pouring
My eyes, swollen red
Your embrace was calming
No words were needed or said
I never knew hope
Until I had you
The way you helped me to cope
The beauty of life I finally knew
My love is pouring
My eyes, sparkling blue
Your love was reassuring
My life now begins with you
I never knew love
Until I loved you
I am beginning this immaculate journey
Hand in hand with you
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AngelofDeath
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2005-03-14 21:43:03]
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Re: Pouring
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by b_rand on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 09:45:42 PM AEST
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| Great job with this, although i am curious as to why you posted it under "Lost Love" peotry? Otherwise, great descriptions. |
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Re: Pouring
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by xtremcalibur on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 04:54:15 AM AEST
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| Beautiful. Good write. |
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