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Mesmerizing
Contributed by
freckle
on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 10:31:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Mesmerizing
Mesmerizing
your eyes
can hold
my world
When I gaze
into
their depths
I know
I am loved
There are times
your eyes
hold
our shared laughter
Moments
of inspiration
shine
from your eyes
Deep, deep
sorrow
I know
you feel
your eyes
bare your soul
All
that we share
is revealed
in
the layers
of your eyes
Mesmerizing
your eyes
can hold
my world.
Carol Sossaman
3/14/05
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freckle
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2005-03-14 22:31:01]
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Re: Mesmerizing
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 10:35:43 PM AEST
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verry beautiful carol tender love vibes straight from the heart . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Mesmerizing
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by Tanmaya on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 12:38:45 AM AEST
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What a beautiful expression of love...
Compassionate, deep, magical.
I liked the simplicity of the poem, it holds great beauty in it.
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Re: Mesmerizing
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 12:42:22 AM AEST
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| wow deep so deep. |
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Re: Mesmerizing
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 06:02:22 AM AEST
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Carol this was such a Mesmerizing write.
It was such a sweet way of showing your love and adoration for your hubby.
I'm glad i got to read this.
Jane ^_^ |
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Re: Mesmerizing
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 02:21:59 PM AEST
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I love the way you used the form to intensify the mezmerizing effect!!
Well done, he is a lucky person!! |
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Re: Mesmerizing
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 04:45:49 AM AEST
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| Awesome poem..... you have such talent!!! |
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Re: Mesmerizing
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 07:30:26 PM AEST
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Carol ... this is almost like something I would expect to see on a greeting card ... call Hallmark. I mean that as a compliment. It is honest, open, pure and simple ... and great.
Nicely written ~
Nazzy ~ |
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